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سوال 602457
با سلامممکن است متن زیر را لطفامطالعه کنید و اشکالات آن را مطرح کنید.1) آیا ازلحاظ نگارشی نیاز به ویرایش دارد؟2) آیاغلط گرامری دارد؟3) می شود خلاصه ترشود؟ Dear professor, I am writing to ask you about the subject of my proposal. I know you are not responsible for it but since I've emailed DrGhaemi and after more than one month he has not answered me so far Iam asking you about it. The topic that I was going to research was the comparison andcontrast between Attar's Mantegh ut Teir and Chaucer's The Parliament of Fowls,nowsince the very comparison and contrast seems to me somehow impossibleI've decided to change it. Because I think the comparison of Attar's Mantegh ut Tei to Chaucer's TheParliament of Fowls is like a comparison of diamond with silver,sohow is it possible to compare diamond with silver?! Now I am writing to ask you about another topic of my proposal. The topic that I am going to research is Traces of Postmodernism inSula's Tony Morrison.1)You are involved with thesis topics but for me I have to check withprofessor Ghaemi who is directly involved in thesis supervision,andtill now I have got no answer from him,so would you please tell mehow can I contact him and how can I know whether he would accept thevery topic and it is OK by him or not? I mean instead of sending emailis there any other way to have contact with him?2 )To your view is it acceptable or should I add another novel writtenby Tony Morrison?3 )Isn't it a topic that somebody has done previously? Very many thanks. Sincerely Yours,
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دوست عزیز،
شیوه نگارش شما صحیح و قابل قبول است تنها چند مورد کوچک را اصلاح کرده و پیشنهاد میدهم. فایل نهایی به شرح ذیل است.
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؟ Dear professor, I am writing to ask you about the subject of my proposal. I know you are not responsible for it but since I've emailed Dr Ghaemi and after more than one month he has not answered me so far I am asking you about it. The topic that I was going to research was the comparison and contrast between Attar's Mantegh ut Teir and Chaucer's The Parliament of Fowls, now since the very comparison and contrast seems somehow impossible to me, I've decided to change it. Because I think the comparison of Attar's Mantegh ut Tei to Chaucer's The Parliament of Fowls is like a comparison of diamond with silver, how is it possible to compare diamond with silver?! Now I am writing to ask you about another topic for my proposal. The topic that I am going to work on is “Traces of Postmodernism in Sula's Tony Morrison”. 1) You are involved with thesis topics but I have to check with professor Ghaemi who is directly involved in thesis supervision, and till now I have got no answer from him. So would you please tell me how can I contact him and how can I know whether he would accept the very topic and is it OK by him or not? I mean, is there any other way to have contact with him, instead of sending email? 2) Is it acceptable or should I add another novel written by Tony Morrison? 3) Isn't it a topic that somebody has done previously? Thanks a lot. Sincerely Yours,
دوست عزیز،
شیوه نگارش شما صحیح و قابل قبول است تنها چند مورد کوچک را اصلاح کرده و پیشنهاد میدهم. فایل نهایی به شرح ذیل است.
موفق باشید
؟ Dear professor, I am writing to ask you about the subject of my proposal. I know you are not responsible for it but since I've emailed Dr Ghaemi and after more than one month he has not answered me so far I am asking you about it. The topic that I was going to research was the comparison and contrast between Attar's Mantegh ut Teir and Chaucer's The Parliament of Fowls, now since the very comparison and contrast seems somehow impossible to me, I've decided to change it. Because I think the comparison of Attar's Mantegh ut Tei to Chaucer's The Parliament of Fowls is like a comparison of diamond with silver, how is it possible to compare diamond with silver?! Now I am writing to ask you about another topic for my proposal. The topic that I am going to work on is “Traces of Postmodernism in Sula's Tony Morrison”. 1) You are involved with thesis topics but I have to check with professor Ghaemi who is directly involved in thesis supervision, and till now I have got no answer from him. So would you please tell me how can I contact him and how can I know whether he would accept the very topic and is it OK by him or not? I mean, is there any other way to have contact with him, instead of sending email? 2) Is it acceptable or should I add another novel written by Tony Morrison? 3) Isn't it a topic that somebody has done previously? Thanks a lot. Sincerely Yours,